Tuesday, 25 June 2013

Add detail in the middle sentences

Children in rooms 16 to 18  had to stay inside at lunchtime on Friday

All the year 5 and 6 children were lucky to have their own netbooks.

My empty tummy is making me hungry and it is rumbling.

The fields are gooby and muddy outside
Learning my time tables is really good it is important.

Monday, 24 June 2013

This is the best writing i did today

 At Pt England we are very luckily because all the 5/6 children have their own netbook.

All through the year at Pt England school it has been raining and  the fields get muddy outside.

Venn Diagram about Hercules planes

I have been leaning about Hercules planes and that is how they get to Antarctica.

Wednesday, 12 June 2013

Detail in Sentences

WALT  Add  detail in the middle of sentences.

Mr Burt, who is the principle of our school, loves to take assemblies on Fridays.

Mr Burt takes assemblies, so we learn the new korero every  Friday.

Lots of people from other countries visit Auckland City in New Zealand.

Monday, 10 June 2013

My reading about Seals

My goals in writing

When I write paragraphs I am learning to use clever  vocabulary to say what I mean.

Antarctic Animals

Do you know how Antarctic Animals survive in the cold?
They have big thick layers, of blaba or fat to keep them warm.

In Antarctica there are predators such as the killer whale , Leopard seals and the Weddell seal. They hunt things like krill , others seals and fish.

In the winter there are two Animals that stay in the holy of winter. They are the weddell seal and the emperor Penguin that stay in the holy of winter.

Thursday, 6 June 2013

My Parallelogram

A Parallelogram is when there are 7 shapes. Thesis in clod shapes like 5 triangles , 1 square and 1 parallelograms. Today I  made a house then I1 had to colour it in then  put it all togater to make a house.