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Monday 25 November 2013

Kawau camp

 A complex sentence has more than one clause. It has added detail giving the reader more information. It adds interest and makes writing JUICY.

For  our third event,Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.


Mr Jacobsen was our coach, which helped me through  the confidence course.


Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course up high in camp bentzon.



It was my first time, I was nervous about sailing on camp.


I was nervous about sailing, because I was solo on camp.


I was nervous about sailing on camp. but I think I can do it.




Its was the first time that, We went abseiling.

We went abseiling but I was scared.

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